So between posting pages 20 and 21 and today I managed to get updated pages processed. So here is pages 20 and 21 again with the final page 22. Note the change in title, the added color in page 2 panel 3, and the change in mohawk.

This is a comic that I'm currently allowing myself to write in the thumbnails. A light walk through the park where the enjoyment is in the journey and not the destination. But after the 8 pages I'm currently working on I should at least start setting smaller goals, keeping fieldnotes, and have a intended destination in mind even if we don't get there. While I want people to enjoy the journey, I want anyone who gets to the end to feel rewarded.