
Yessssss
Took me a bit to grasp the structure of the piece, but fun to read these two interacting again.
Yeee, hehehe sorry. It's like 3 timelines lol. I did write most of the first draft months ago and knew the structure was a bit wonky but I still really liked it. Next part should be a bit simpler.
oh good god there hell is going to freeze the fuck over XD
I see what you meant about the lips now.
Also...
*looks at the Die Hard Arkham WIP*
Well... fuck.
(like Die Hard Arkham literally has a scene where [character] is so fucking done that she [thing] and vaporizes the misogynistic bad guy. And the wall behind him. And half the mountain 40km away.)
on no lmao hehehe, great minds think alike <3
(and thank you saying, i was autistically unsure how to ask for elaboration on that part lol)
"Lazer? I 'ardly know-" (this user and everything behind her have been obliterated by lazers)
we're gonna lose a whole mountain range at this rate (and hope you liked it <3 this definitely wouldn't have happened w/o your own magical girls hehe.)
Hmm.... the Little Misses are the elements, turned into cataclysm. Natural disasters: fire, freeze, earthquake, storm.... and cosmic gamma ray burst
when you've got four elements but marketing says there needs to be a roster of five.
there's little hints on why laser is why the way she is, and the others are more... filtered, which we'll get to see soon >:3 (hopefully not in 4 months again, cos i'm gonna like early access launch this on itch imminently as part of a bundle lol).