This next chapter is basically just banter with interspersed combat, and I should be happy, because half of that is what I'm best at, but the other half I don't know if I do so well.
Eh. You can guess which is which.
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Mabel's Musings
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in reply to @MabelGreysmoke's post:
|Ulhauriear| We feel like you can do it! If you’re feeling unsteady, maybe try writing a few vignettes where it’s mostly banter with interspersed combat to refine the skill? Run them by some trusted folks? That’s what we think at least! ^_^
It's a good thought dear, and trust me, I am constantly running lines to my editors for feedback. I am honestly shocked they still respond!
Combat is really difficult to write engagingly...
It really can be, but what I'm finding is the trick is punchy quick lines, and a cinematic view.
