NireBryce

reality is the battlefield

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🐥 I am not embroiled in any legal battle
🐦 other than battles that are legal 🎮

I speak to the universe and it speaks back, in it's own way.

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I live on the northeast coast of the US.

'non-functional programmer'. 'far left'.

conceptual midwife.

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pnictogen-wing
@pnictogen-wing

J. K. Rowling's publicity people apparently arranged for her to win a meaningless accolade in the British press—"greatest opening line of all time" for Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone. (EDIT: Rowling got fifth place, I should stress, so the Telegraph and all the other fawning press articles are simply stressing that she's "one of the greatest", not THE greatest.)

I read that book a month ago. I cannot remember its opening line. At all.

~Chara


Shorkgirl
@Shorkgirl
Clears her throat.

I object most strenuously to that drivel of the TERF in Chief being the greatest opening line of all time, and submit for consideration by the vox populi:

“It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were all going direct the other way – in short, the period was so far like the present period, that some of its noisiest authorities insisted on its being received, for good or for evil, in the superlative degree of comparison only.”
Charles Dickens - A Tale of Two Cities

Don't make me break out the Dostoyevsky, JK. Go have your publicist buy you another award you didn't earn.

selnyam
@selnyam

ALSO
FUCKING
Gideon the Ninth has a fucking AMAZING first line

" In the myriadic year o our Lord – the ten thousandth year of the King Undying, the kindly Prince of Death! – Gideon Nav packed her sword, her shoes, and her dirty magazines, and she escaped from the House of the Ninth."
-"Gideon the Ninth" by Tamsyn Muir

that single line gives us a TON of info about the world and Gideon Nav. Like the original post said, I don't even REMEMBER what the first line of the winning book was. I don't know I'll EVER forget the first line to Gideon the Ninth

(I am not discrediting any of the AMAZING first lines in classic literature, I just wanted to use a more recent book)


DecayWTF
@DecayWTF

But none of those hold to a candle to the famous line:

"I'm a wizard, so go fuck yourself!" said Harry Potter, to his fat uncle (he's fat so you know he's evil).


DecayWTF
@DecayWTF

lmao god I wasn't that far off the mark

Mr. and Mrs. Dursley, of number four Privet Drive, were proud to say that they were perfectly normal, thank you very much.


DianeThePunk
@DianeThePunk

I'm just gonna take this opportunity to list off a few incredible opening lines that are way better than anything JKR has ever written.

All this happened, more or less.

Kurt Vonnegut Jr., Slaughterhouse Five

One morning, when Gregor Samsa woke from troubled dreams, he found himself transformed in his bed into a horrible vermin

Franz Kafka, The Metamorphosis, Trans. David Wyllie

No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream.

Shirley Jackson, The Haunting of Hill House

This is not for you.

Mark Z. Danielewski, House of Leaves


namelessWrench
@namelessWrench

O so vast, O so mighty, The Great River rolls to sea,
Flowers do waves thrash, Heroes do sands smash,
When all the dreams drain, Same are loss and gain.
Green mountains remain, Under pink sunsets,
Hoary fishers and woodcutters, Along the banks, find calm water,
In autumn moon or in spring wind, By the wine jars, fill porcelain. - Luo Guanzhong, Romance of the Three Kingdoms


garak
@garak

The sky above the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel.

  • William Gibson, Neuromancer. Absolute classic, that one. All the more poignant that dead channels have a different color now.

The moon blew up without warning and for no apparent reason.

  • Neil Stephenson, Seveneves. Personal favorite. For an author who tends to draw things out by hundreds of pages, he sure got right the fuck to the point that time.

Did you know there's a contest for shittiest opening lines? They're amazing.

My life exploded on the day I found my wife galloping, like the fifth horseman of the apocalypse, Cuckoldry, upon her fateful steed, my brother’s manhood.

It's called the Little Lytton, in honor of Edward Bulwer-Lytton, original author of "It was a dark and stormy night."


IkomaTanomori
@IkomaTanomori

For consideration, the opening paragraph of His Majesty's Dragon, beginning of a series deserving to have its movies already STOP SITTING ON THE OPTION, PETER JACKSON.


NireBryce
@NireBryce

Hayden Griffin was plucking a fish when the gravity bell rang. The dull clang penetrated even the thick wooden walls of the corporation inn; it was designed to be heard all over town.

Sun of Suns


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in reply to @pnictogen-wing's post:

the canonization of J. K. Rowling as the jewel in the crown of British letters is slightly mystifying, especially because her post-Potter career has been so listless. it's not like "Fantastic Beasts" or "Cormorant Strike" have set the world ablaze, so...maybe the British press should find someone a bit fresher to be their literary standard-bearer? but I guess Rowling has been able to afford a lot of publicity on her side. ~Chara

When it leaked she was writing those detective books, it was a weird semi-scandal. Like, it was seen a juicy news, because it was a secret uncovered, but it didn't actually negatively affect the press's opinion of her. So like, it didn't really matter what the books were, because JKR was secretly publishing under a pen name! That's spicy news!

Propping up bad and bigoted artists who were involved in successful media is par for the course for British media. See also David Walliams, beloved childrens' author who previously performed blackface on the BBC.
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