this is so incredibly good. we started reading this last night, finished it earlier today, and aaaaa? what a good story. incredibly hot when it gets to the fun stuff, and the sense of comedic timing is so consistent and perfect. this is some really good writing, and we all (even the ace nerd in here! okay he ducked out for most of the horny stuff, but stuck around for the rest) loved reading this. talk about getting that bread indeed.