Late 20s tgirl. Elf ear pervert. Some say hemipenis girl. Writing mostly original F/F. Stories will frequently be horny so if you're under 18 you're getting blocked.



eatthepen
@eatthepen

previously
Chapter 1: The Door
Chapter 2: The Pilot
Chapter 3: The Priest
Chapter 4: The Warmaker
Chapter 5: The Emperor

[Original fiction, 9k words this chapter]

6. The First Step

Stiff and sore, I nevertheless hunched in the direction of the new arrival, left hand glowing with the key as I extended my right cythorn. Saffa was exposed in space to my left; Dufore stood to my right, spreading their hands in a placating posture of surrender. I did not have spare thought to scorn their choice, my mind racing with what I might hope to do with only the power of my cystem against a chrononaut. I could see no more sign of the Emperor than had been left of Birleg.

"Who are you?" Saffa said, her high voice wavering. There were new tears in her clothing, some of them bloodied, from the explosion of violence that had knocked us all down.

The chrononaut looked at her. "You're not one of Lucius' tree people."

"I'm from the Commonwealth," she said, with a hint of what might have been hope.

"The fuck is that?" Their voice was deep and curt, unmistakably tired.


eatthepen
@eatthepen

bumping this for the not-turkey-day-anymore crowd

also apparently it's itch creator day, I have a few short stories up over there that you could maybe check out if you fancied so doing?


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I probably shouldn't have committed to reading this entire story after finishing a post solidly after midnight Eastern. Guess it's a good thing I read quickly?

This is excellent work. I'm reminded particularly of H.G. Wells' Time Machine in its character, between both the assiduous documenting of details and the pretenses towards how someone could metatextually be reading this story. You did an excellent job of answering the many mysteries you presented without making it feel unnatural or obligatory; I'm truly in awe of how smoothly you answered both "why does the camp two shaft have sideways gravity" and "what did the graffiti say." Truly, a wonderful journey of ~64k words.

... Oh, damn, this was ~64k words. No wonder it gripped me like a novel, yet still took me the better part of 4 hours to read. If you ever see to getting this edited & printed, let me know; I'd love to own a copy to share around.

i remember seeing the first chapter when you posted it, but it was only just now that @ceresultra posted about this being done that i was reminded of it. and dang. i've gotta ruminate on everything that happened here, i haven't bingeread that intensely for a good while. good goin', this was a hell of a read!!!