this is a shot that has me thinking a little, because i think looking at it now the framing and blocking is a little awkward, and i would position Altani slightly differently in the frame nowadays, and also probably angle it so the cliff face she's standing on doesn't feel as intrusive in the scene. as it is now the angle of the camera means the cliff face just in very abruptly and also cuts off her legs?? i think this needs a slightly longer lens and a slightly higher angle, move character a little to the left maybe

the lighting ideas hold up though, probably needed a near dof adjustment