Demon who is about to ensure that your body reflects the twisted nature of your soul.
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oh that payoff was delectable, indeed, as indeed i was - and i had wondered how the name thing worked, was going to work. neat. i can almost see the echoes of the mortal names in the others', now
I have to be honest, none of the other succubus names were made at the time to reflect their mortal names. Could probably make some of them work though? Go a little bit kingdom hearts mode where you look at some of the Org XIII names from before they were nobodies and it's like "Okay you clearly came up with the jumbled name first and then tried to make something fit"
I mean, even if you looked at Greyzala's name and went "uhhhh what" there's no consistent way to reverse-engineer that to "Grace" without knowing "Grace" is where it started, so that tracks. But, like, Tinixi could've been a Tina or something, Azaerixia could be an Azealia instead, who knows - there's almost an echo of a name a human could've had, in the syllables, but it's far enough off that it makes a delightfully forceful reminder they aren't even remotely that, anymore, they've been twisted into something else entirely.
In my head the zay is the stressed syllable so it's not quite as clear, but yeah
Thanks! It took me a while because I wanted to make sure it all wrapped up nicely
WOOOOOO 
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you go Grezayla, show Isabela that new bod!
this whole thing is beautiful, and extremely hot, I can't wait to grab the complete ebook on itch (? 
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I'll try to have it on itch tomorrow maybe? Glad you liked it!
well, notes:
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the description of lilith's desire for greyzala's soul is a little terrifying lol, it's this lovely bit of tension as to what's gonna happen that gets paid off tremendously. the thought of feeling what lilith desires of her as well, the touch of fear is very submitting.
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there are vast and vastly inappropriate comments about tinixi hehe. i must say there was a slight worry in me about like what happens when you're a girl to a mistress with hundreds of other girls, like the worrying thought of "what happens when you're not the new girl anymore, do any of them get lonely?". the like assurance and comfort lilith gives to tinixi is very sweet <3
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isabela seems nice. i hope she doesn't lose too much of her lifespan lol, bc that phrasing is the same as "do you want my number" lol.
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lamb lamb lamb lamb sheep horns bc lamb sheepie lamb
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It's meant to be! Lilith is ancient and powerful, and I definitely tried to write her in a way that like, she is a monster tempting girls into giving her their souls, from a christian point of view i'm sure she is just a villain. It's just that like, okay so what? Fuck heaven. Give me the gay sin polycule.
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I'm sure it's difficult, she only has so much time to give, but I imagine being able to literally sense that she loves you and having hundreds of other succubi who also love you makes things easier. Still, she tries her best to spend time with each of them as much as she can.
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Isabela is nice! I imagine her as more of a "parents sent her off to the convent to make her ~behave properly~" type, so she isn't quite as oh heavens the demons want my soul as Grezayla was.
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the motherfucking. SHEAP.
i really do not have the words right now but i love this just So much. So much. shoutouts to isabela maybe she will also become a demon down the line 👀
"Hey yeah after I left the convent I also decided I'm a lesbian so can I get your number so we can fuck more often?"
Hell yeah, love Grezayla getting started with a new client.
It's very easy to get a succubus to give you her number.
Please take their number. Pwease 🥺
This was wonderful...! And inspiring... I must write...
Yaaaay!! Full Succubus Grezalya!! And driving her first mortal from god's light before even being summoned >:3 Isabela leaving the convent after Grace's disappearance, and saving the summoning circle to check on her~ So sweet~
And damn, wish I could have a tongue down to my knees 😳
And also!! Having a dick stuck down your throat for a week straight, riding that oxygen-deprived high as long as you like.... wow, what a dream...~
She was worried!
You just gotta become a succubus, this is surely achievable please dm me if you find out how to achieve this
I can never truly stay away from a finished series, she may return
amazing. the tf felt quite trans (in a good way)! and what an absolutely adorable ending!
Fantastic end to a great ride. (heh)
One comment tho: Azaerixia should be allowed to have all the puppies she wants, mistress should get on an... exchange program with Heaven or something. Puppy time share. I'm sure the denizens of Heaven can use some of Azaerixia's skills. Awesome mani-pedis or the like.
Man, I went back and re-read some parts, and going from the intense guilt of realizing she was wrong about hell and Lilith to THIS is.... I'm so glad she got out. I'm so glad.
What an ending. So worth the wait. Sign me up, I want to be succubus tfed next.
Also: 8 days under there!? goddamn. that scene...this whole story has been really hot. and super sweet. wonderful all around