Location map, revised and inked. The ink wash helps distinguish the forms but in retrospect this might have been better with heavy blacks instead of the overall grey. My eyes keep bouncing off the details. So next time, heavy blacks and more generous negative space, and also plan where the labels are going to go ahead of time so they don't end up slapped on top
tbh I think color would help a ton here but I've got to move on to the next thing!