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batking lich

  • they/he/it

27, nonbinary disaster, vampire appreciator & saw girly


i think my #1 complaint with this book, even more than the timeline quibbles, are these little pockets of time where we know less than the characters, for at times arbitrary reasons. it doesn't come up that much but it does bother me. like with the one incident i mentioned where we're told about a scene after the fact only a short while later via the characters watching video playback of it. like, there was no benefit to not just letting the scene play out, ya know? we don't necessarily need to know everything all the time but sometimes the withholding of specific info feels a bit cheap.

all that said i do believe it is high praise that that's my biggest issue. i really am enjoying this, despite mostly stopping to complain lol


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