caela-argent

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F-Z-Blackheart
@F-Z-Blackheart

Swallow that harsh fear
Let the rain wash it away
Live well in the now
The breeze is warm, and loving
Stand then poet, sing with me


caela-argent
@caela-argent

Writing some poems
With the help of a sabre-tooth
Trying something new
We're not very coordinated
Call it a learning process


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in reply to @caela-argent's post:

so tanka is like haiku in that it is a syllable count.

The count is
5/7/5/7/7
I do like this though and I'm always down to help people learn a new skill!

If I were to offer a rewrite:

Writing some poems
With help of a sabre-tooth
Trying something new
Ah but we are quite clumsy
Call it a learning process.

This would rectify your poem to the format, but again I love this!