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posts from @calliope tagged #Matthew Gregory Lewis

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Alonzo the Brave originally appeared in Lewis's novel, The Monk. Some folks at the time claimed that the success of the novel was due to the poems in it, and not the rest of the book. Whether that's true or now, Lewis' gothic poems, with this at the head, staked out his reputation and reshaped the gothic poem in England.

You can see the influence of "Lenora" of course, with the ghost returning, but the change of scenery and careful setting effects mark it out as distinct, as does the peculiar metric pattern Lewis uses, which was much imitated (and mocked).

I'm ending the month on a grisly gothic wedding because it's my own wedding anniversary! Yes, I was married on Halloween, why wouldn't I have been? In the chapel of a former nunnery turned school turned venue, as it happens.

Anyway, the poem is very good. If I say much more about it, there wouldn't be much point in reading it.



This is it! We've reached the end of The Monk by Matthew Gregory Lewis. We've seen ghost nuns, murders, illicit sex, sorcery, and the fucking Devil. In the penultimate chapter we get a strange "fake ending," in which we see the denouement for all the heroes. But what about Ambrosio, the actual main character? Well, perhaps less surprisingly than usual, it's the Spanish Inquisition!

Plot Summary
  • The narrator gives us a short overview of the city's reaction to Ambrosio's crimes and imprisonment, going from shock to anger and, eventually, forgetfulness.
  • Ambrosio is not having a great time in his cell. After some scene-setting, he's dragged before the panel. Our attention is drawn to the cruel implements of "the question," and then we're told that they not only want Ambrosio to confess to his actual crimes, but to crimes he did not commit -- after all, he did not actually engage his soul to the devil or perform any magic. At least, no grimoire stuff. We might think using an enchanted myrtle branch counts, but not in this case.
  • Ambrosio is a fucker, and he knows he's a fucker, but he refuses to admit to something he didn't do. So he gets the ever living shit tortured out of him. Matilda is there too, and tells them she did it all, Ambrosio didn't do any magic. They don't just want to punish Ambrosio for crimes, they want to burn his ass, so they hold out for the confession.
  • If you're thinking, hey, maybe torture isn't an effective method of eliciting information, then you're right! You'll just get the answer you want, or the one the victim thinks you want!
  • Ambrosio is tossed into his cell and, after a long wait in which he does the Big Gothic thing of pacing around and tormenting himself, Matilda appears. She's wreathed in beautiful light and says she's leaving. She's accepted that there was no way out but death and therefore finally consented to sell her soul to the devil. He's given her the power to leave, and will keep her the rest of her life in incredible splendor and pleasure.
  • Matilda asks Ambrosio to come with her, to sell his own soul. Her argument is that they're both big fucked, they're going to hell when they die no matter what, and so they might as well not die of fucking fire.
  • Ambrosio still quails. Despite all he's done, he believes he can still repent and avoid eternal damnation. Now, this is very different than just before Maltilda came in, because a lot of his self-torment is coming from how he's convinced he can't be forgiven, something that, as we noted several chapters ago, is expressly against Christian doctrine. This is probably an important point for understanding the novel. Lewis may not have liked Catholicism very much, but it does seem that he was fairly happy with the basics of Christianity as he saw them (that is, the Church of England version).
  • Matilda finally gives up, but she leaves a book. If he reads a sentence from a particular page backwards, the devil will appear and Ambrosio can do the deal himself. Matilda disappearas.
  • Ambrosio is tortured again. He finally gives in and provides the confession they want. His burning is set for a few days hence, as they'd already scheduled a big old party auto-de-fe at midnight and wanted Ambrosio to headline it.
  • Back in his cell, Ambrosio torments himself some more until he gives in and summons the devil. He's not a pretty bishounen this time, he's got the bat wings and everything now. They have a back and forth which is honestly interesting but if you're into pop culture depictions of sorcerous magic you should probably just read the book at this point. Ambrosio finally agrees and gets down to signing a contract. At the last moment he freaks out and throws the pen away.
  • The devil, understandably pissed off to have traveled for a business meeting at which no business was done, fucks off, but not before telling Ambrosio that the next time he summons the devil, the devil will either get the deal or just kill Ambrosio himself.
  • Night of the burning, Ambrosio hears the distant sounds of someone coming and summons the devil again. After some more prevarication, he signs up and the devil whisks him away. He asks to be taken away from the jail. He forgot to ask for the whole "long and luxurious life" part.
  • The devil takes him to some mountains and sets into his "The Real Ending Speech." The devil knew Ambrosio wasn't really pious, because of all the stuff a few chapters back about the unnaturalness of raising children to this stuff and so on. He decided to fuck Ambrosio up. Matilda is a devil, formed to look like Ambrosio's Madonna poster (remember the weird story where she said she had someone paint it to look like her?). Oh, and Antonia is Ambrosio's sister.
  • Yeah. Cast your mind way back. Remember how Elvira and Antonia were always inexplicably comfortable around him? Remember how Ambrosio suddenly feels revulsion at having had sex with her (raping her) but still somehow loves her? And also, there's that whole story about how Elvira, when she had to flee the country, somehow left her son behind but took her daughter? And how Ambrosio was dropped off at the abbey? Yup.
  • Then the devil makes fun of Ambrosio for giving in, for sucking so bad, and for not remembering to ask for cool long life and riches and shit, and then he throws Ambrosio off a mountain.
  • The book ends with a frankly shudder-movie-worthy scene where Ambrosio, still alive but unable to see, crawls on his horribly injured body towards the sound of water until a flood comes down and finally kills him.


And That's the End!

Yikes, we might say. I think, for a writer who spoiled Antonia's grisly fate like 3 times throughout the novel, he did a pretty good job of telegraphing the accidental incest angle without showing all his cards. Of course, it's deployed to raise the final moment of the novel to a fever pitch, to kind of replicate Ambrosio committing his worst sin just before being killed -- he doesn't, but revealing it like that has a similar effect dramatically. And this reminds me once again of Shakespeare, because Hamlet has a very good chance to kill Claudius but it's right after Claudius confesses and prays. It's not enough for Hamlet to kill Claudius -- he wants Claudius to burn in hell, and he worries that he'll go to heaven and thus lets him live, which leads to... well... the rest of the trainwreck of the play.

The incest angle is probably drawn from Walpole, though Lewis draws from so many sources it's difficult to be sure. At any rate, even in The Mysterious Mother it's parent/child and not sibling/sibling.

Religion and The Monk

I've talked a bit already about how Lewis keeps criticizing Catholicism throughout the novel, but you can also see a consistent kind of piety in the heroes that is humble, quiet, often transactional (not in that they pray for boons, but that they give the churches money for masses and such in order to help the dead), and usually both positively good and lacking in evil. So the person is both doing good and avoiding evil. Ambrosio, on the other hand, isn't really doing much good. You might argue that even if his heart's not in it, or that he's gratifying his pride by becoming so famous that at least his preaching is doing good by spreading more thinking and belief in religion. But the book doesn't agree, I think.

I think Lewis's take on how religion works is that it's personal, that it isn't involved in what one does but what one is. That's pretty standard for a particular thread of Protestantism of course, which is how we get people calling for genocide and then saying they're good people, because a priori they're good, "good" is a condition, not a series of actions.

However, Lewis is no theologian -- the bad people do bad things too. But I think the thing the book is trying to talk about is upbringing. People raised in good environments turn out good and those in bad environments turn out bad. Ambrosio and Antonia are, after all, siblings, and ended up as polar opposites. He's also making much more obvious statements about how Catholicism is a "bad environment" for people.

Superstition but also there's the devil

It's worth briefly pointing out that so many of Lewis's characters talk about all ghosts and magic as "superstition" but in the novel itself it turns out they're very wrong, and even after encountering evidence they keep going. After all, Lorenzo believes Raymond when the latter says he encoutered a ghost and an immortal man. But he still insists it's silly superstition to think the catacombs could be haunted.

As the editor of my edition puts it, the characters are Enlightenment beings on the surface, but Lewis is deeply conflicted about the Enlightment, so under the surface the older things lurk.

And that's, after all, a lot of what went into creating Castle of Otranto in the first place. A kind of Miltonian defiance of what is and what apparently "ought to be."

This is the last big point I want to make, and something that's important to consider to the history of the gothic as a genre. It's a product of the Enlightenment world, and it looks backwards in time (for now) precisely because it wants to imagine another world, one that isn't the Enlightenment.

Without losing the thread, or without straying from it for too long, there was a movement in England in the decade before Otranto called The Graveyard Poets. Exemplified by Thomas Gray, a friend of Walpole's, they were basically goths, walking around in graveyards, imagining being dead, and so on. It all seems very tame to us now, but given that the mass of poetry1 was about order and correctness, and maybe exploring the growing tension between town and country, the Graveyard Poets were weird. They reminded us we're all going to die! They reminded us that all dead people are the same, and class distinctions don't matter! Simply, they undermined the egoism of the Enlightenment's confidence in human rationality.

And the gothic writers wanted in on that. So, to speak about The Monk specifically, the characters are all scrupulously rationalistic: Ambrosio, who has literally witnessed the Devil being summoned in a circle, still poo-poos someone for saying she saw a ghost. Raymond, who made out with a ghost, still poo-poos people for superstitions. The book contorts itself to give us rationality-bros in a setting where they aren't very natural in order to slap them down.

And I think this is part of why the gruesome horror nature of the book is important: it's not just being edgy (though it is), it's not just reveling in gross shit (though it is), it's sharply contrasting the heavy, human, corporeal, meaty life and its inevitable, gross, end with the clean marble lines of the Enlightenment imagination. We aren't made of marble, we're made of meat and soul. We aren't vaulting over the heavens on wings of rationality, we're quivering in horror at a glimpse of worms writhing in dead flesh.

The gothic will continue to do this, to undermine the safety of rationalism, even as it moves geographically and temporally. Whatever the new rationalism is in culture, the gothic will set itself in opposition to it. That's part of what makes science fiction such a driving power in literature: it's a sub-species of the gothic and, remembered or not, that opposition to rationalism is built into the dna, even as the rationalism bros took it up in the early 20th century and tried to circle back around to sweeping the vault of heaven with their jetpacks and spaceships.


  1. not all of it, but the main curated bits of it -- the 18th century curated itself, and we're still trying to step outside their own views of their poetry



Chapter 11 is the penultimate, the almost-there! It's devoted primarily to Agnes filling everyone in on what happened to her after she drank the poison, as told by Ursula previously. But it also provides the denouement.

Yes, that's weird, isn't it? There's a chapter yet to go.

In chapter 11 we have CW for starvation and solitary confinement, as well as body horror relating to putrefying corpses. In addition, childbirth and horror related to that. I'll keep the plot summary mild, but in this case some of the details are important to the interpretation. Also, though naturally oblique because it's an 18th century novel, there's rape in this chapter too. Finally, the death of an infant.


Plot Summary
  • I skipped over this last chapter just because it works just as well here: one of the women Lorenzo rescued is not a nun, but a relation of the prioress she brought in to be in the parade. She's one of the most beautiful women of Madrid, and starts eyeing Lorenzo immediately. To Lorenzo's credit, when he sees her all dressed up for the parade he notes her beauty as though she's a statue, because he's in love with Antonia. He warms to her slightly when he brings Agnes up out of the dungeon: she's the person who helps take care of her the most.
  • Lewis literally says, though, that yes she's nice and sweet but also she notices immediately that Lorenzo is kind-hearted and takes care of the prisoner to look good for him. Is that bad? Is it ok? Neutral? I'm not that kind of philosopher, I don't fucking know.
  • So remember Ambrosio? Yeah, the main character? Well, he sits and waits on Antonia to wake up. Like the super genius he is, he's just sitting in the fucking tomb she was deposited in at the end of the funeral, and when Antonia wakes up, he speaks to her a bit and then, well, yeah, he rapes her.
  • That's bad, but I want to dwell for a second on the tomb thing instead. He says, specifically, that he doesn't care, that it's the sweetest bower, because Antonia is there and will now be his. This back-and-forth of horror and happiness is going to be a thing I want to talk about later, so stick a pin in it for now.
  • So again, we don't need to go into details. Ambrosio rapes Antonia. And as soon as he's done, he feels a loathing, first directed at her, and then at himself, and then her again. Slowly he calms down and almost gives in to her pleas to release her. He never wants to "enjoy her" (rape her) again. But he can't trust that she'll stay silent, and so he resolves to keep her imprisoned in the catacombs, visiting her every day so they can cry about the awful situation she's in... that... that he's responsible for.
  • Ambrosio is an idiot, I guess, is what we're getting here.
  • Matilda arrives. The riot is spreading to the abbey from the priory, and of course the monks are freaking out because Ambrosio is missing. Ambrosio points out that he can't let Antonia reveal what's happened. Matilda cheerfully says she's got the solution to that and whips out a knife.
  • Ambrosio stops her from killing Antonia, and this finally makes Matilda sick of him. She swears she's leaving him to his own devices. However, Antonia takes this opportunity to escape. Ambrosio pursues her and catches her up, only to hear that her cries are being answered from further on -- the soldiers are coming. Ambrosio panics and fucking stabs Antonia to death with that dagger he's still holding.
  • He runs away, but only back into the room they'd been hidden in. He's eventually found, with the bloody dagger and blood over all his clothes. Matilda is in there. They're both arrested and given over to the Inquisition.
  • That lady, the one who helps Agnes, her name is Victoria, and she takes Agnes to her home and has the family doctor attend. She and her mother take excellent care of Agnes, who eventually thinks of them as dear friends. Agnes recovers.
  • Raymond also recovers, though his joy at learning Agnes is alive nearly kills him first.
  • Lorenzo, on the other hand, gets sick. He was in the party of soldiers who came across Antonia murdered, and he sat with her in her dying moments. She is happy, because his torment at her death proves he loves her. She dies in his arms, exactly when Elvira's ghost predicted (Antonia stops being sweet to Lorenzo to mention it).
  • Lorenzo is on his sickbed, convinced he's going to die. Hilariously, no one else is that concerned. His uncle quotes Shakespeare to say no one has ever died of love. What's interesting to me here is that people, men and women both, have had their lives endangered throughout this book by getting bad news, but not in this case.
  • What's even weirder is that everybody starts matchmaking while he's still bedridden. It turns out Agnes and Victoria have known each other for a while. Victoria visited the priory a lot and made friends with Agnes, who would often talk about her brother when she'd gotten a letter from him. So Victoria is sort of low key in love with Lorenzo already. Victoria's mother begins to visit Lorenzo, and starts bringing Victoria along. Agnes comes when she's well. They all make sure Lorenzo spends plenty of time with Victoria, but don't push anything, at least.
  • It sort of works? By the end of the chapter they're married.
  • The rest of the chapter, apart from the denouement, is devoted to Agnes' story. After she woke up in a tomb, just as Antonia did, she discovered a little food, implying someone knows she's alive. She thought she was really going to die, after all. Obviously, for us, she took the same potion that Ambrosio used on Antonia.
  • Agnes is eventually taken from the tomb into the prison, chastised by the mother superior all the while. She gives birth in there, totally alone, and because she knows nothing about childcare, the baby dies shortly afterwards. The bundle she had, last chapter, is the corpse of the baby. She continues to cuddle and weep over it despite the fact that it's basically all worms and bones now.
  • This is gross enough I'm going to make you highlight it to read: Agnes says sometimes she would wake up to find her hands "beringed" in worms from handling the corpse.
  • The one nun who kept feeding her, at the prioress's orders, gets sick, so she stops coming. Agnes speculates the others simply forgot about her. So while they had barely been feeding her, they hadn't meant her to die. This is an extremely uncomfortable comparison, but you know how the Nazis underfed prisoners just enough so they lived but were technically starving? That's what was happening here -- and before they stop giving her food altogether. The prioress and her lackeys are, simply, the worst people in the novel. They are unmitigated villains, tormenting a person in a way that we, now, have to compare to fucking nazis, for the sin of... embarrassing the prioress. Because that's what this is about, she says so early on: Ambrosio discovered the plot to remove Agnes from the priory and told the prioress about it.
  • So, yeah, anyway, Agnes is of course rescued, and she catches up with the present day again. The denouement happens, where Agnes and Raymond get married, Lorenzo is sad for a really long time but goes to visit them at their out-of-town villa, and Victoria happens to be there, until finally she makes it really obvious she's in love, her mother approaches Lorenzo and Raymond, and they make it happen. We're told that slowly but surely, Antonia's memory is erased from Lorenzo's heart, and that Victoria was good enough to deserve to be the only person he loved.
  • the end
  • except obviously not. But the end for them.

The horror and happiness stuff

This isn't particularly, like, intelligent on its own, but I wanted to draw it out into its own section. There's a lot of really immediate switches in this story, like when Raymond blissfully greets Agnes only to find it's a dead nun, or when Ambrosio sates his lust and is immediately disgusted, or when [last chapter spoiler redacted], and on and on. And obviously this is just a storytelling technique, right? But a lot of gothic stories will dwell on bad stuff, rather than quickly switching from good to bad.

What I mean is, so for example think of Otranto, where there are clear up and downs, but each is dwelt on -- within the context of a much shorter, faster paced novel, more "time" is spent in the in-betweens, the sine wave is stretched out furthere. The Monk, for all that it's quite long, has a lot of breakneck switchbacks, a shorter frequency sine wave, ups and downs cramming together in the chute trying to hit the characters, and us, all at once.

the fake ending

The novel kind of writes this large with the structure of the last two chapters. This chapter is an ending, it's a quintessential ending to a sentimental story, where people mourn the dead, slowly come to terms with their deaths, and live happily ever after. As Wilde put it, or has his narrow-minded Miss Prism put it, in The Importance of Being Earnest, "the good ended happily, and the bad unhappily. that is what Fiction means." But of course no mention is made at all of what happens to Ambrosio.

I never know if anyone reading has, like, not read the books before and is sort of enjoying the plot via my summaries, but I assume that's the case and at least try not to spoil things before the correct chapter. I say that, though, to say that it's not exactly a spoiler that things are going to go badly for Ambrosio. The ending will probably still be a bit of a surprise, but he's been taken by the Inquisition, this doesn't look good for our boy, you know?

So the fake ending does what the previous section was talking about, writ large: it provides an excess of happiness only for everything after to be fucking awful, and suddenly awful. I'm not sure I have intelligent things to say about that apart from pointing it out though.

On the "fake ending" itself, it is amusing that it contains such a pat ending only to have what's considered one of the craziest endings of an 18th century gothic novel.

Otranto's specter

The "fake ending" also reminds me of Otranto's ending. If you didn't read that book or the posts I made, in short, the heroine is killed by stabbing there as well, and the hero is plunged into mournful recollection and grief. The heroine's friend is also in love with the hero though, and spends all her time with him as they both weep and grieve together. Eventually they're married.

You can see the resemblance. Reading Otranto is supposedly what inspired Lewis to write this book in the first place, so we know he was familiar with its plot. As with that previous post on reference as haunting, here, more than anywher else, one of the strongest influences on the novel shows itself, appearing right at the end, like one of the skulls so often accidentally touched by the characters in this novel. It's as though the book, having shown us plenteous bones, shows us its own.

If this has to do with anything in particular, I think it has to do with the pace. The intro to my edition quotes an older scholar who commented on how notable it is that it takes Ambrosio forever to do anything. He's one of the first gothic villains who does very little, when the entire book is taken into account. And each step is examined carefully, both internally (Ambrosio's monologues) and externally (the novel's narrator). So now, before Ambrosio's presumably grisly and becoming end, the book pauses to usher in another novel's ending, to remind us where Ambrosio came from in the first place.



It's nearly the end! There are two more chapters. I'm unsure if I'll do them together or separately. These two, though, are where we see some of the good shit.

CW: the chapter itself has some fairly descriptive, but not excessively detailed, passages describing a starving imprisoned figure. I'll be mentioning that but won't, myself, describe the figure or quote the passages.

CW: also some fairly academic discussion of historical homophobia and violence.

Plot Summary

chapter 9

  • Ambrosio suffers the pangs of guilt, but only for a while. We're told time calms him down. But very little time actually passes.
  • Additionally, Matilda is at work on him. She focuses first on how no one has figured out he was involved, and indeed everyone assumes Elvira's illness finally killed her. Matilda then sets to work: she tells Ambrosio that he should not give up on his desires.
  • The focus switches to Elvira's household First, Antonia wakes the day after brosio killed her mother and trips over Elvira's corpse. She is naturally shocked and, since this is a gothic novel written in the 18th century, this makes her temporarily ill.
  • Their landlady, Jacintha, pays for the burial and takes care of Antonia.
  • One night, as they sit up late waiting for Leonella to come back -- yeah, remember her? She's married now and has been dragging her feet coming back, but wrote that she'll be there Tuesday. Spoiler, she does not arrive Tuesday. At any rate, sitting up waiting, Antonia is distracted and depressed. She can't weave, she can't play music. So goes into her mother's bedroom to get a book and sees her mother's ghost.
  • The ghost tells her than in three days they will "meet again." Antonia faints and Jacintha wakes her up after hearing her shrike and rushing in.
  • Jacintha is terrified of ghosts. She rushed out again (Lewis adds the detail that she lets Antonia's head drop again, so she nopes out very hard indeed) and goes all the way to Ambrosio's abbey. She wants him to come back and banish the ghost, as she believes he has magical Jesus superpowers.
  • Matilda advises Ambrosio to hear her out After a long distracted monologue from Jacintha, in the style of Walpole's stupid poor people who can never get to the point, Ambrosio learns what happened. Matilda tells him this his chance and she'll explain later. Ambrosio agrees to come the following day
  • Once Jacintha is out of the room, Matilda tells Ambrosio there's a potion in the nunnery's dispensary that will send Antonia into convulsions and simulate death, allowing him to "bury" her at the monastery and then keep Antonia forever. Ambrosio goes for it, tours the nunnery, steals some potion when no one is looking, and attends Antonia at her sickbed. He puts the potion in her medicine.
  • there's a bride episode where Ambrosio suffers because he thinks the ghost is back, only to learn Antonia's maid, knowing that he wants to ravish Antonia, snuck into the room he's sitting in and spied on him. It's a brief moment where Lewis demonstrates he can do what Radcliffe does, I think, though opinions will probably differ in whether he's successful.
  • The potion works, Ambrosio takes charge. We're told Leonella corms into town Friday and learned Roth sadness what happened But we're also told that Ambrosio informs her that Antonia left her money on her deathbed, and discharges that after paying Elvira's few debts. The chapter ends by telling us Leonella leaves directly after for Cordova again. This serves to guarantee that no one is looking for Antonia, I think. It also paints a slightly less positive picture of Leonella, who was just gulty if being vain before.

Chapter 10

  • Lorenzo, busy with getting the orders and forces together to arrest the prioress, totally misses Elvira's death and Antonia's "death." Indeed, Raymond, in his sickbed, receives a letter from Antonia but his staff turn the messenger away because he's so ill.
  • There's a description of the pageant of St. Claire in the streets, and then Don Ramirez and his men, along with Lorenzo, step in and take the prioress. She remarks that she's "betrayed," but Ursula, the informant from a few chapters back, accuses her publicly -- a necessity, as the crowd is at first infuriated by how the soldiers interrupt the parade and assault the nun.
  • Ursula tells in short what happened to Agnes up to where we already knew, and then in more detail what happened after. The prioress imprisoned her and took a vote of the nunnery elders, hoping to invoke an ancient punishment where the criminal is locked away until death with no light, and nothing but bread and water. Ursula and two or three other nuns dissent, and the prioress temporarily withdraws the motion. But in secret, she poisoned Agnes. Ursula happened to be visiting her and hid behind an arras (there's no Shakespeare reference to see here), and witnessed it all. If Agnes did not drink the poison, the prioress would kill her -- she pulls a knife.
  • On hearing this, the crowd goes nuts and tears the prioress apart, and then descends on the nunnery, burning it and seeking out any nun, presming them all to be guilty.
  • Lorenzo rushes in to stop them as best he can. He spies a woman shrieking in fear and disappearing. He follows her to find that he's in the catacombs, and comes across the woman and several others, all nuns, discussing what to do next. They think he's part of the crowd but he assures them he will protect them.
  • When he says they should hide out for a few hours, they freak out. The catacomb is haunted you see. When he gives them a speech about how that's silly, he's interrupted by mysterious groans. However, upon searching, he finds they're coming from a statue of St. Claire. The prioress told all the nuns stories that it would destroy any who touched it. There's even a decaying hand stuck to the arm. Lorenzo figures out that the prioress simply wanted to keep people away and finds a switch on the arm that allows the statue to be moved away from a grate leading into a horrible cavern below.
  • He finds an emaciated, starving woman talking to herself in delirium. She has a bundle she kisses and then recoils from.
  • Lorenzo, after getting over his horror, reveals himself and frees her by ripping the chain off the wall. Don Ramirez's men appear and Lorenzo gets the nuns safely outside, the riot having ended. But he decides to make sure there are no other prisoners below. Ramirez joins him. Just a they begin to descend, someone appears from further down the catacomb hall, shouting for help.
  • The chapter ends

Chapter 10, as folks say now, whips ass. Nine is good as it sets up the awful conclusion of Antonia finally in Ambrosio's power -- something that Radcliffe explored at length in Mysteries of Udolpho, which came out before The Monk.1

The French Revolution

It's at this point I think fairly accepted that the first half of chapter 10 is about the French revolution. A lot of English authors supported it, only to be embarrassed when the mass killings began. It seems that he's criticizing "mob rule" and the murder of innocent people by the unhinged majority.

And, well, probably. But I think there's more at work here too. You see, the book is just constantly talking about superstition and the evils of the church. And had the soldiers successfully arrested the prioress, she wouldn't have gone before a civil court: she would have been tried by the Inquisition, which is just another arm of the church. It's difficult for me to "unsee" a fairly righteous anger turned to an attempt to get justice that the system may not give, as the perpetrator is one of its own. However, in Lewis' young-person pessimism, they turn to murderin' as well.

The Prisoner

Per my CW I won't describe the prisoner except to say, as above, that she is emaciated and delirious. Look, we all know it's Agnes, let's just get that out of the way. But it's important that, in the book nobody else can tell that yet. Her brother rescues her and cannot identify her. This is how low the church will stoop, according to Lewis. For the "venal sin" (as Ursula puts it in her public accusation), the nuns punished Agnes as though they themselves were devils (as Agnes herself says in her delirious speech). There's a very clear and glaring hypocrisy here: they torment Agnes and relish in it while telling her she must repent for the hideous crime of... fucking. The church thinks it's ok to torture but not to fuck.

I use "the church" like this because that seems to be what's happening here. Lewis is pointedly criticizing the Catholic church, presumably from the point of view of an 18th century Englishman who feels the protestant tradition is totally lacking in such systemic abuses.

We, of course, know otherwise. But that's neither here nor there in this case.

spooky shit

Chapters 9 and 10 between them have it all. Ghosts, forboding prognostication by same, potions that feign death (definitely not a Shakespeare reference), torture, prisons, gloom, catacombs, secret passages, what's not to like?

queerness

The book I have, which is the Broadview edition, notes on the passage describing the mob killing the prioress, that the reader should see the appendix, which contains a description of a mob assaulting a group of homosexuals.

That was just great to see. This is a genuinely new seam of historical context. Lewis is an odd character himself. He's fervently anti-Catholic and therefore did support the French revolution in the beginning, but was not only horrified by the Terror (as above), but was literally in danger because of the French army. He was in Holland, attached to an ambassador, when the French army advanced towards it.

This is more to the point of course: some scholars think Lewis was gay. He translated some poems that were very homoerotic, though when he includes one in The Monk he carefully edits it to make it more heterosexual.

In that case, though, it may be possible that he has in mind, not just the Revolution, but the way gay people were often subject to mob assault by the authorities. I won't detail the contemporary description of a mob in London assaulting a "club" of gay people, but it's bad, and it was public, and it was under the watching and doubtlessly approving eyes of the police, as the club was in custody at the time.

It's perhaps a little odd that a gay man would have one of the villains -- and the villain which the text shows no sympathy towards -- stand in for the queer people subject to public violence. But then again, it's entirely understandable that if Lewis were gay, or bi, or queer in any sense, that he would have ambivalent feelings towards it at the time.

Gear up for the final chapters!


  1. at some point I feel like I inadvertently said Radcliffe's books came after this one. The Italian did, but not her other books.