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Profile pic and banner credits: sharkaeopteryx art by @superkiak! eggbug by eggbug! Mash-up by me!
[Alt-text for pfp: a cute sharkaeopteryx sat on the ground with legs out, wings down, jaw ajar, and hed empty, looking at eggbug and eggbug's enigmatic smile.]
[Alt-text for banner: a Spirit Halloween banner with eggbug and the sharkaeopteryx that Superkiak drew for me looking at it with inscrutable expressions]


I'm a Vietnamese cis woman born and currently living in the U.S. You may know me from Sandwich, from Twitter or Mastodon (same username), or on Twitch as Sharkaeopteryx. I do not have a Discord or Bluesky account.

Ask me about language learning/teaching, cooking/eating food, late diagnosis ADHD, and volunteer small business mentoring. Or don't, I'm not the boss of you.


I think people deserve to be young, make mistakes, and grow without being held to standards they don't know about yet and are still learning. So, if you are under 22, please don't try to strike up a friendship or get involved in discussions on my posts.


Please don't automatically assume I follow/know/co-sign someone just because I reposted something from them—sometimes I do, sometimes I don't. Also, if you think being removed as a follower when we're not mutuals is a cardinal sin, please do not follow me.


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Anonymous User asked:

Hello! I enjoy your writing, especially in Meatpunks. Recently I've been trying to write a VN, but I don't have much experience. Are there any specific resources or tips you'd recommend on learning how to get better? Thanks.

WRITING TIPS:

  • Read read read read read. Read books, read poems, read essays, read anything that compels you deeply. Read outside your comfort zone. When a turn of phrase punches you in the chest, write it down; understand what it's doing and how it's doing it.
  • Write write write write write. Do style exercises to mimic your favorite authors. Sketch out worlds with as few words as possible. Get as dense with your writing as you can, making every single word useful. (My personal version of this was writing in /r/shortscarystories every day for a few months -- the 500-word limit forced me to focus my writing hard.) Have others read your writing and give honest criticism: pay attention to what they say is wrong, but ignore any solutions they give.
  • Think think think think think. What do you want to write about? Why do you want to write it? How can you best accomplish that with the tools you've been given? A piece of writing advice i heard a long time ago that every writer has a "free tool" that they can bring out whenever they're stuck: some people are great at worldbuilding, some people are great at character interactions, some people are great at poetic prose, etc. Figuring out your free tools (via the previous exercises) will help you play to your strengths and shore up your weaknesses.
  • Repeat repeat repeat repeat repeat. Read write think read write think. What interests you now? How do you need to grow to be satisfied by your own work? All the while, keep that big project in your line of sight, constantly working on it. Sometimes the only way to learn is by doing. You'll notice the writing in meatpunks s2 is way better than in s1 by virtue of me gaining experience along the way (and practicing a ton between seasons).

That's pretty much it! Writing isn't magic, but it is a craft, and to practice it well you need to know how it works. Learn grammar rules so you can break them effectively. Learn genre rules so you can subvert them without looking like a newcomer. Learn each rule of storytelling, each piece of advice, and break it in half as soon as you don't need it anymore.


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