no love for the laundry-day that loomed before her
she trudged down to the treacherous dungeon
where dryers roared and detergent reeked
where tumbledryers roared and detergent reeked
fixed it
see this is part of why it so hard, is in school you're taught that alliteration is when words start with the same letter but detergent doesn't actually work here as far as traditional alliterative verse goes because the stress is on the second syllable so it's actually a t-alliterating word
also this poetry format needs a better name than alliterative verse, the most generic and vague name conceivable
