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bruno
@bruno

I think most people in the English-speaking world get an idea beaten into them during their education: that you should write in short, to-the-point sentences that have a very regular and clear structure.

But here's the thing, go read any piece of text that you consider lush and evocative, especially in a texty video game context, and just... pay attention to how much punctuation is there, how often there are subclauses or irregular breaks (em dashes, etc), how often there's grammatical oddities like funky tenses. It's usually a lot!


bruno
@bruno

This doesn't just go for your Fallen Londons and Disco Elysii, either. Look at any game that has a lot of short dialogue without VO, like Animal Crossing. You'll see heavy use of ellipsis, big variations in style from different characters, odd or irregular sentence structures. Lots of little ways of building interest and voice. You can do it without walls of text; you can do it at a grade school reading level.


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still very clearly remembering doing some sort of creative writing assignment for school in like MS or what i had of elementary and my family distinctly acted like i made some sort of Horrible Mistake when i used an ellipsis for stylistic effect and made me change it, when i knew for a fact it was fine because i had seen it used that way in writing a ton, probably a significant amount in video games. this included my aunt who has a handful of published ebooks and was (is?) one of those kinds of people who's very weird and pretentious about grammar and shit like that. it made small me very pissed off and i don't think i ever stopped being pissed off about it lol.

thankfully once there were actual teachers involved i don't remember my education trying very much, if at all, to drill out my flowery, long-winded writing, and i was always praised as a good writer (i do think i'm something of a wordsmith myself), especially whenever i got to take off the technical writing boots and go wild. nowadays i think i write pretty reasonably when i'm trying to Write, but often when just typing out some long internet comment or discord message or something i will just write it with the flow of how i talk and think (which is to say, single-sentence paragraphs with many, many clauses strung together and lots and lots of parentheses. lmao)