The poet they probably shouldn’t have sent. I watch anime and am sometimes accused of reading books. I'm writing a long gay giant robot story in verse—probably this millennium's best yuri mecha epic poem, through lack of competition.


'Now praise those names on tombs of steel engraved | And toll this rotting country’s countless bells.'

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in reply to @thaliarchus's post:

Inspired by your original post on epic poetry, I downloaded and read all of CWKB, and very much enjoyed it. I do have a couple of possible typos to point out:

  • p. 29, "One one such rock ..." I presume this should be "On one such rock ..."
  • p, 44. Are "Burgh-Heart" and "Burgh-Shield" two people, or two different names for the same person? It wasn't clear to me from context.
  • p. 89. "Our king for for rites is meant ..." It sounds as if "for" was accidentally repeated.

Thank you—it’s very kind of you to take the time to note these down and list them, and I’ll be sure to iron them out in the next file. I’m really glad to hear that you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for giving it a read!