Paper revisions to CWKB Book I done! Still have to transcribe them. As predicted, no shifts in plot (you know what I think about plot). But many lines sound better now, and I’ve retrofitted in epithets and terms developed since II onward. e.g. Qwerthart’s epithets, ‘wise in peace and war’ and ‘poised in war and peace’.
The poet they probably shouldn’t have sent. I watch anime and am sometimes accused of reading books. I'm writing a long gay giant robot story in verse—probably this millennium's best yuri mecha epic poem, through lack of competition.
'Now praise those names on tombs of steel engraved | And toll this rotting country’s countless bells.'
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