Just uploaded files with revisions to books I–III. Mostly tweaks to metre and wording, and in a few places outright corrections—not big narrative changes.

The poet they probably shouldn’t have sent. I watch anime and am sometimes accused of reading books. I'm writing a long gay giant robot story in verse—probably this millennium's best yuri mecha epic poem, through lack of competition.
'Now praise those names on tombs of steel engraved | And toll this rotting country’s countless bells.'
Just uploaded files with revisions to books I–III. Mostly tweaks to metre and wording, and in a few places outright corrections—not big narrative changes.