The poet they probably shouldn’t have sent. I watch anime and am sometimes accused of reading books. I'm writing a long gay giant robot story in verse—probably this millennium's best yuri mecha epic poem, through lack of competition.


'Now praise those names on tombs of steel engraved | And toll this rotting country’s countless bells.'


thaliarchus
@thaliarchus

A few months back I set out to see whether you can write about giant robots in long-form verse.

Still not sure I know the answer, but you can now grab the first book of Cosmic Warlord Kin-Bright on itch.io.


thaliarchus
@thaliarchus

Ah, that's a great question! 'Fold space' as a phrase for some kind of FTL has a long history, back to Dune and I imagine probably before that. But most of the details I came up with.

Fold is a helpful and old monosyllable with at least three distinct etymologies in English: a fold in a sheet, returning to the fold, and fold-as-earth/Earth. I wanted to call Book I 'Burning X-space' because there's an early episode of Ideon called, in the English translation we have, 'Burning Null Space'.


I hoped the FTL journeying might hold more interest than just zipping around instantly in hyperspace; perhaps there're ways to do that, but they're definitely not routine or widespread, and would probably involve a chthonic. An influence at play there was the Crest/Banner of the Stars books: I didn't borrow details from them, but I was inspired by Morioka's effort in those to have FTL be a combat context with its own hazards and rules.

I wanted the combat within an FTL context to be more naval than combat in normal space is (will be), and 'fold' suggests undulation, so I figured if they were fighting across great sweeping peaks and troughs, larger than you'd get in a terrestrial ocean, that'd be quasi-naval but would also bring some fun strangeness along with it. The Fold must be some kind of thin, weird, flat thing beyond our reality that maps, in unhelpfully obtuse and hard-to-sense ways, onto our three-dimensional universe.

The thought that tying the Fold to reality temporarily might be called stitching, though it involves tearing, came naturally from the cloth sense of fold.

If the spaceships are designed to float on something during FTL travel, that answers the question of what you do with any spaceships that descend to a planet with bodies of water on it.


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Re: aiming for a naval feel, the way you did it reminded me of some of the things the more recent Yamato adaptations get up to (probably earlier takes on the material, too, though my experience is limited). They really lean into the space battleship idea visually and make space look ocean-like.

I think the earliest mecha show I've seen that I remember using the "fold" terminology for FTL travel is Macross? Wouldn't be surprised if there was something before that, though (Wikipedia suggests Heinlein may have beaten Dune in using the word by about a decade, and who knows at this point what earlier pulp stuff was doing).

Unrelated, but in general I'm enjoying it so far, and I think one of my favorite things going on is this kind of defamiliarization collision coming from the vocabulary. What could a chariot possibly look like in this context? I dunno, but it's fun to think about. It's an interesting variation on the more new-wavey approach of just being very abstract about how things are described.

Yeah, Yamato insists on making space as oceanic as possible, & it probably takes that as far as anything in anime. Except possibly for Harlock, in which the Arcadia appears to have a wooden aftercastle despite operating in a vacuum.

And I'm delighted to hear that you're enjoying it! I found myself thinking along similar lines to 'defamiliarisation collision' when writing it: cribbing shamelessly from my influences grubs up a pretty rich vocabulary of martial things that might have far-future equivalents in ways that challenge the imagination.