What I Did
Revised The Girl, pages 7 - 51: from the bridge until just before she goes through the door.
Thoughts
I worked through the lion's share of the 'realist' section of the novel, before the point where continuity falls apart. The question I feel I have to ask myself: does it come together? Does it make sense? I feel it does, especially one the girl's in her aunt's apartment, but this feeling my be the inevitable consequence of the fact that I'm writing it: it is continuous because I write it out at once. Does this principle also apply to the reader? Will it seem as one because they read it as such?