thinking about the sound of music again and it got stuck in my head

Do - "a deer, a female deer" - strong start! fun wordplay, fun little image to rotate in my head as a starting lyric. 4/5
Re - "a drop of golden sun" - really pretty imagery here! this is a really nice lyric. 5/5
Mi - "a name I call myself" - alright, to be fair i'm not sure what else you'd do with the word so i'll let it pass, but only just barely. 3/5
Fa - "a long, long way to run" - that's not the word? you're thinking of "far"? please revise. 2/5
So - "a needle pulling thread" - back to some good wordplay! i don't hate it, but maybe the description could use a little more jeuje? zhoosh? zhuzh?? namako mute. 4/5
La - "a note to follow So" - okay this one's a non-description. this doesn't say anything. this is only non-tautological by a single step. 1/5
Ti - "a drink with jam and bread" - good recovery from that trainwreck! it makes me do a double take if i'm not thinking about it which is fun. 4/5

...and that brings us back to Do (do, do, do)